The Whisky Lessons
A retired intelligence officer shares his experience and lessons with a young recruit during a whisky-fueled training session.
This short story is an experiment in ChatGPT generated short fiction. The model isn't especially good at complex storytelling, but it did surprise in spots. Each of the four sections was generated with its own series of prompts (multiple attempts were required) that set the scene, mood, and time. I also provided subtle coaching on style, but I did not set the plot or full arc of the story at the beginning. I mostly let it do its thing and coached along the way. The model also chose the title and section headings, although those also required multiple attempts. My edits in the piece are sparse - probably around ten words in total. Anyway, it was a fun exercise, and the experiment is more important than the outcome.
I created the photo for this post with Midjourney.
The misty morning landscape lay before James Langley, as he sat on the porch of his small cabin, lost in a reverie. The chirping of the birds welcomed the rising sun, but Langley's mind was far away from the peace of the moment. Memories of the friends and agents he had lost along the way, haunted him like ghosts.
The weight of those losses was heavy on his mind as he looked out over the peaceful countryside, his thoughts muddled in a web of complex emotions. Langley had always been a man of honor, a man of unwavering determination and unflappable resolve, but he was not immune to the pain of the past.
As he prepared to retire from the service he had given so much to, Langley knew that he had paid a high cost for his country's safety. The sacrifices he had made were worth it, but the pain and the loss were a burden that he carried with him every day.
In the stillness of the morning, Langley felt the pull of the past, memories of his long and difficult career flooding his mind. He had faced danger at every turn, made countless sacrifices, and seen the best and worst of humanity during his time in service.
But despite his achievements, Langley couldn't help but wonder if he had made the right choices. The pain and the loss weighed heavy on his soul, a reminder of the high cost of the work he had done.
As the sun continued to rise, casting a warm glow over the misty landscape, Langley knew that he had one final task to complete. He would retire to his cabin, but he would also spend the rest of his days mentoring the next generation of intelligence officers, passing on the lessons and experiences that he had gained during his long and difficult career. One of those officers would be visiting in the morning.
For Langley, the pain and the loss would always be with him, a reminder of the sacrifices that had been made for the greater good. But as he looked out over the peaceful countryside, he felt a sense of calm wash over him. He had done what he had to do and that was it.
The next morning, James Langley woke up early, preparing for the arrival of the junior officer who was coming to train with him. He had spent the previous day cleaning the cabin and making sure everything was in order. As he sipped his coffee, Langley felt a sense of anticipation building in his chest.
When the junior officer arrived, Langley greeted him warmly and gestured for him to sit down in one of the chairs by the fireplace. James grabbed a whisky bottle from the mantle before sitting down. He poured them both a strong pour, and the officer looked slightly taken aback.
"I'm sorry, sir, but it's only morning," the officer said, looking at the drink in his hand.
Langley chuckled. "Yes, I know," he said. "But this is your training, son. We're going to get drunk and tell stories. We run this my way."
The officer looked slightly confused, but he took a sip of the whisky anyway, feeling the warmth of the drink spread through his body.
"I don't understand, sir," the officer said. "I thought we were going to do some drills or something."
Langley smiled, his eyes twinkling. "Fuck that. I'm too old for drills."
The officer looked slightly bewildered, but he settled back into his chair, sipping his whisky and started to listen as Langley regaled him with tales of his time in the service.
As the morning wore on, Langley and the officer continued to talk, sharing stories and experiences. The officer listened intently as Langley talked about the times he had faced danger and adversity, and how he had learned to rely on his instincts and his training to survive.
The officer was still slightly confused by the approach, but he could sense that there was a method to Langley's madness. He took another sip of whisky, feeling a sense of warmth and camaraderie that he had never experienced before.
Later in the evening, the fire in the cabin was still burning, casting a warm glow throughout the small space. James Langley and the young officer were both feeling the effects of the whisky, their inhibitions lowered by the alcohol.
As they sat by the fire, Langley suddenly leaned forward, his voice low and urgent. "Son, there's something I need to tell you," he said. "Something that you need to know."
The officer looked up, his eyes heavy with drink. "What is it, sir?" he asked, his curiosity piqued.
Langley took a deep breath, his eyes fixed on the officer. "I have a confession to make," he said. "Something that I've been carrying with me for a long time."
The officer's eyes widened, and he sat up straighter, sensing the weight of what Langley was about to say.
"When I was a young man, I made a mistake," Langley continued, his voice barely above a whisper. "A mistake that I've never been able to forget. I really fucked up. I was working as a journalist at the time, and I uncovered a story that was way out of my league. I tried to blow the whistle on some very powerful people, and it ended up costing me everything."
The officer listened intently, his mind racing with the implications of what Langley was telling him.
"I lost everything," Langley said, his voice shaking with emotion. "I had to go into hiding for a long time, until an old friend reached out to me and offered me a way out."
The officer was stunned, realizing that the man in front of him had been through more than he had ever imagined. They stared at each other and James struggled to find the words he was looking for.
"I joined the service because I had nowhere else to go," Langley said. "I didn't do it for the love of the game, or for the thrill of the chase. I didn't do it to save anyone. I did it because I had no other options. I did it to save myself. This is a job. That's it. It's just another fucking job. Don't let it kill you,"
The officer sat in stunned silence, realizing that he had been wrong about Langley all along. He had always assumed that the man was a career spy, born and bred for the service. But now he saw that Langley was just like him - a man who had made a mistake and was looking for a way out.
As the night wore on, Langley and the officer continued to talk, sharing stories and experiences. The officer had been given a lot to think about, and he realized that he had been so focused on following the path that had been laid out for him that he had forgotten to be open to new possibilities. Then there was nothing but blackness as the whisky claimed him.
The Long Game
The next morning, the young officer woke up in his chair next to the smoldering fireplace. The events of the night before were hazy in his mind, but he could still remember most of the unexpected revelations that James Langley had shared with him.
As he gathered his thoughts and rubbed the sleep from his eyes, the officer reflected on what he had learned from his time with Langley. He realized that he had been too focused on following the path that had been laid out for him, too focused on doing things the way they had always been done or that he had been taught to do. Now he saw that there were many different paths to success, and that the most important thing was to be open to new possibilities.
Just then, James Langley emerged from the bedroom, looking a bit disheveled but no worse for wear after their night of drinking. He smiled warmly at the officer, motioning for him to follow him outside.
"Let's get some fresh air," Langley said. "You need to clear your head before you hit the road."
The officer followed Langley outside, feeling the crisp morning air on his face. He looked out at the snow-capped mountains in the distance, feeling a sense of clarity and purpose that he had never felt before.
"Thank you, sir," the officer said, turning to Langley. "For everything."
James Langley paused and looked at him intently.
"Before you go, son, tell me," Langley said. "What did you learn?"
The officer paused for a moment, collecting his thoughts. "I learned that this job is not for the faint of heart," he said. "I learned that it takes courage, creativity, and a willingness to take risks to succeed."
Langley nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "Good," he said. "But remember, the job is also about perspective. You need to be able to see the bigger picture, to understand the context of the threats you face."
The officer nodded, feeling a sense of clarity wash over him. He realized that he had been so focused on the immediate threats in front of him that he had forgotten to step back and take a broader view.
"Sometimes you need to be fearless and creative," Langley continued. "You need to be able to improvise and adapt when things don't go according to plan. But you also need to be able to step back and see the forest for the trees. You need to be able to see the long game."
The officer felt a sense of gratitude for the unexpected turn that his training had taken. He knew that he had learned some valuable lessons from James Langley, and that he would carry them with him for the rest of his career. As he climbed into his car and started the engine, he felt a sense of excitement and anticipation for the road ahead. He knew that he had a long way to go, but he also knew that he was on the right path.
“Blogs of War generated this text in part with GPT-3, OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model. Upon generating draft language, the author reviewed, edited, and revised the language to their own liking and takes ultimate responsibility for the content of this publication.”